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When Life Was Really Child's Play

Oh, the stress-free, carefree world of children O' take me back to the lil kids' playpen When we tried on mom's cosmetics and lipsticks and built playhouses with plastic blocks and bricks And had fun with cooking set picnics Anything could be a toy and our racket could annoy We turned everything into play things We played pretend queens and kings We then played 'mom and dad' Oh the squealing fun we had! Teasing, chasing hens and kittens climbing the grumpy neighbour's fence. There was paper airplanes and frisking in the rains Paper boats too were made and hide'n'seek was played And when that wasn't enough we played blind man's bluff. We nimbly climbed the trees hair flailing in the breeze But our child's play naturally mimicked the grownups Lil plastic ones instead of real porcelain cups. Life was all play and games in our growing mental frames. Sand castles and kites childish fights and frights! And kind parents just let them frisk and play for all work and no play makes one a dull boy

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Date: 7/29/2023 10:10:00 AM
A wonderful poem! This brought back so many good childhood memories for me :)
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Date: 11/19/2019 7:16:00 AM
Worth a revisit for sure. Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 8/24/2019 12:08:00 PM
A lovely dip into nostalgia. I also have written a few poems on when we were kids. God Bless. D.
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Date: 4/17/2019 6:22:00 PM
I enjoyed this one so much, Zaynab. It really brings to the reader's mind such familiar and precious memories of childhood. *soupmail
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Date: 12/22/2018 9:40:00 AM
A beautiful couplet, full of surreal and fantastic imagery... Love it, love it, love it! Merry christmas and a happy 2019
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Date: 10/15/2018 1:33:00 PM
Lovely nostalgic imgery. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:50:00 AM
Oh dear! a good retrospective of life...who doesn't miss childhood and the the world could promise!! :D:D Well penned.. Regs Sunita UPD.
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Date: 9/3/2018 9:43:00 AM
The great and unforgettable memories of the childhood. Missed always
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Date: 8/15/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thanks for memories ... yes, the secret is, not to take things seriously. Enjoy this moment, this time, this day. Love-ly little reminders. shalom/salaam/Shanthi Om and Khudah Hafiz
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:58:00 AM
My dear, I ditto these nostalgic sentiments expressed so lovely here! Your wonderful imagery conjuring the good times of a wonderful childhood made me smile today! Well done, my friend! Hugs and love. Pandita
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:16:00 AM
You've caught well the true magic that is childhood-- it seems that growing up causes all the problems in the world!
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:36:00 PM
hey hey hey nicely done ..really enjoyed reading this one
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Date: 7/7/2018 8:58:00 AM
It reminds me so much of when I was a kid. Children are thrust too soon into the real world now leaving their imaginations stunted. Also lack of needing blunts their gratitude. Their joy is so much less for it all. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 6/9/2018 2:05:00 PM
"The children are artists. The problem is how to remain an artist once he/she grows up."
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:50:00 PM
Hello S. zaynab Kamoorpun, This reminds me of a childhood of lots of fun. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/10/2018 4:52:00 AM
Ah! U described this so well! I love the way u write ur poems! Keep writing amazing poems cuz they make my day:) Anna Mia
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/10/2018 1:40:00 PM
Aw warm thanx for your feedback, u r no less a good poetess yourself I'm sure. Take care.
Date: 5/8/2018 4:13:00 PM
You take me back to when childhood was just that, simple and fun, and full of respect..this is truly amazing poetry, and should hang in the archives for future generations..
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/9/2018 12:01:00 AM
Thanx soo much for your great and nice comment, great idea poet, we should instill in our gadget crazy kids the thrills of nature and outdoors,.
Date: 5/8/2018 12:52:00 PM
From start to finish, I related and I enjoyed. Saddens me that children don't seem to go outside and conquer their neighborhood world as you described and I lived. A delightful poem that reminded me of my own inner child and the innocence of my once innocent self. Try "First Grade Innocence" on the first page of my poems, if you'd like - sorta similar and sorta not! All the best ... CayCay
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/8/2018 11:59:00 PM
Aha nice thoughtful reflections on my poem. You are right the world has devolved into a less safer place for children to wander out by themselves. In my childhood I spent more time in trees and among flowers, but can't give it to our kids coz of many reasons, we live in an apartment which has no space for gardens , kids are more stuck on gadgets and mobile handsets than playing outdoors and where there are trees and meadow it isn't that safe perhaps to let them alone. Warmest thanx,
Date: 5/7/2018 8:55:00 PM
I often envied children who lived like this. Very nice scene you've created S.zaynab.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/8/2018 1:34:00 AM
So I guess not everyone had a carefree childhood. Well yes it wasn't actually always piece of cake after 7years of age even for me. The sibling rivalry played big misery I recall too well. Warm thanx and take care.
Date: 5/7/2018 8:14:00 PM
I was going to say this is my favorite line, but there are so many favorite lines here.I think they may ALL be my favorite lines. I captured these because they hit me as really great: Anything could be a toy and our racket could annoy We turned everything into play things We played pretend queens and kings We then played 'mom and dad' Oh the squealing fun we had! What a nice poem you have constructed. I love it!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/8/2018 1:32:00 AM
My warmest Thanxx for your lovely feedback. Take care.
Date: 5/7/2018 4:54:00 PM
very cool.capture lost innocence beautifully
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/8/2018 1:30:00 AM
Thanx so much for the review.
Date: 5/7/2018 12:40:00 PM
This is a fun poem that brings back carefree happy times from long ago. Well done :) Thanks for sharing.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/8/2018 1:29:00 AM
Warmest thanx for your comment Heidi.
Date: 5/7/2018 12:34:00 PM
Awwwww - what a lovely piece dedicated to the joys and wonder of childhood! It awakens nostalgia and the most beautiful times in my life when things were so much more simple! Beautiful! Best wishes. Pandita
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/8/2018 1:28:00 AM
Yes simple and beautiful and stressless. Warm wishes n thanx.
Date: 5/7/2018 11:19:00 AM
Very well penned. You capture the magic of being a child. I too played hide and seek as a child. God Bless
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/8/2018 1:27:00 AM
Yes u put it finely, childhood was magical like fairytale yeahhh. Warmest thanx for your review,.
Date: 5/7/2018 8:01:00 AM
I needed that today :) thank you!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 5/8/2018 1:25:00 AM
Glad to take u back, nostalgic ride down memory lane if we recall it. Warm thanx for comment.
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