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When Jim Swimmed

There once was a fellow named Jim Who always kept himself slim and trim But as he got older He got big as a boulder And sank to the bottom when he swimmed!

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Date: 2/8/2017 8:29:00 AM
I heard he went swimmin'//to eyeball them wimmen//but he drowned//never found//and the sharks are delimbin' PADDLE ON JACKSON!!! 80 degrees plus forecast for today! YAY TEAM SUNSHINE!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/8/2017 8:36:00 AM
Smarty pants!!! Actually, except for some December storms, we've had very little of the white stuff... fingers crossed! Spring training starting soon! YEE HAW!!! Oh for 80 degrees... girls in short shorts... it's a great life!!! WATCH OUT FOR HEAT STROKE!!!

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