When Its Said Its Done

When its said its done
Something like our action
There's no where to run 
There's no place to hide 
Having fun for the moment
Leads to waste of time
All the knowledge given
Just goes down the drain
Swim in a river or ocean?
Faults makes u feel guilty
Love just could go so far 
Action hurts more than words
Strength allows us to lead 
Getting even, take your chances
When its said and done
How many by your side?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 10, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Jamie, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
Mehta Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Creative and thoughtful expressions, jamie
Jones Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 7:24 PM
thank you so much!
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