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When Its Said Its Done

When its said its done Something like our action There's no where to run There's no place to hide Having fun for the moment Leads to waste of time All the knowledge given Just goes down the drain Swim in a river or ocean? Faults makes u feel guilty Love just could go so far Action hurts more than words Strength allows us to lead Getting even, take your chances When its said and done How many by your side?

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Date: 7/10/2016 11:00:00 PM
Jamie, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Date: 7/23/2011 11:02:00 AM
Creative and thoughtful expressions, jamie
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Jamie Jones
Date: 8/16/2011 7:24:00 PM
thank you so much!

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