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When It Rains It Pours

To her from him... They say "when it rains, it pours." The absence of your love is causing a mental war. Since you been gone things just aren't the same. Beneath my breastbone my heart screams your name. It was just this morning I was going through pictures of us together. My world was still storming and I wondered if I could shake this weather. I just can't keep going on like this forever. Why do I feel like a pawn in every endeavor? I long for your caress but my emotions are in chains. I feel this profound loneliness but only when it rains.... To him from her... When the sun comes out, I feel you're nearby, The sadness goes away, and the wind carries my sighs, The longing in my heart, to just start anew, To just kiss your lips and show you how much I truly love you. A storm comes in and washes my face, But every drop is with a tear that says you'll never be replaced, Waiting for your love, just standing in the rain.... A collaboration with "Jimmy Anderson" He wanted to write something together, so off of his idea I wrote the second verse. its nothing personal: inspired off my name slightly i think though.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2010 9:44:00 AM
Very nice collaboration with Jimmy :) really enjoyed this!
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Date: 4/29/2010 1:35:00 PM
Great collaboration, Rain..if I remember this was inspired by your poem "Crumbeled" when you and you B/F broke up.. Take care...Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/27/2010 9:46:00 AM
Sweet Rain I am working on my tag, I got a good one not as bad as yours its all right,(Baby boy)
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Date: 4/23/2010 5:56:00 PM
Well done, enjoyed have yourself a nice one ,,Irma
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Date: 4/22/2010 9:31:00 AM
It is rhyme you two and perhaps even couplet form and very nice! Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2010 8:34:00 AM
Well done Rain, nice duo- Is he a good friend, take care P.d.
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:51:00 AM
really good co write my friend take a look at my newest cheers rainbow
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Date: 4/16/2010 8:41:00 PM
I liked the different view points; much enjoyed!;)
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Date: 4/15/2010 2:22:00 PM
this was a thoughtful thing to write, it has beauty in it:)
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Date: 4/15/2010 10:57:00 AM
Enjoyed you guys!
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