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When It Comes To Love

Don’t insult me with mediocrity When it comes to love I’m a woman of passion Of intensity Trilling “I'll set you on fire” Mentality Not a “Sure, why not?” Neutrality Don’t insult me with mediocrity When it comes to love. Don’t appease me When it comes to love I’m a woman of dignity Of sincerity Honest “I can see through you!” Ability Not an “I’m so touched” Complacency Don’t appease me When it comes to love Don’t quiet me When it comes to love I’m a woman of expression Of confession Not a “Everything’s fine” Morality But a “You consume me!” Totality Don’t quiet me When it comes to love. Don’t fool me When it comes to love I’m a woman of discernment Of understanding Not a “I’ll share you” Congeniality But a “You're all mine!” Fatality Don’t fool me When it comes to love. When it comes to love... Your my possession My cognition My "You're the man of my dreams" Confession My "You color my world." Expression My "You make me melt." Obsession When it comes to love That's what you are to me. Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 5/10/2013 6:10:00 AM
its such a lovely poem and so deep!!!
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Date: 5/7/2013 4:39:00 AM
i loveeee your passion! wow incredible habibiiiiii what an amazing poem filled with passion!!
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Date: 5/4/2013 3:13:00 PM
Very passionate write with your usual intensity Eileen. Can't see anyone fooling you or quitening you lol. A very creative write.Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2013 4:21:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. I always look for your posts, and you never disappoint. Thanks! :)
Date: 5/4/2013 11:05:00 AM
Wow, one of your best Eileen - and that's saying something! I loved the stark contrasts between the indifference and the passion. It totally suits you and you expressed yourself amazingly. The bigger words in the middle aren't easy to work with, but it seemed effortless coming from your pen. Extraordinarily written!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2013 12:16:00 PM
Timothy, thanks for your "dripping honesty". ;) It means so much to me!
Date: 5/4/2013 8:06:00 AM
Very passionate poem by you here Eileen.Enjoyed.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2013 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Kash. I am passionate about many things. I've written a poem entitled Passionate about Life. If you get the chance, maybe you can give it a read. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 5/3/2013 9:16:00 PM
Whoopety-whoop-whoop!! You're a very passionate person, Eileen. Keep it up and stay young forever. An entertaining read, for sure. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2013 12:20:00 PM
Sometimes I'm too passionate, it seems. ;) About the staying young bit, got a bday coming up this month...18th. Going to be 46. Who would have thought! Hugs, my dear.
Date: 5/3/2013 8:52:00 PM
Go for it Eileen, he is a lucky guy, lots of passion her.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2013 12:21:00 PM
Thanks, Richard for saying that.
Date: 5/3/2013 8:40:00 PM
yikes... Love the way you express this poem. Love the ending... always~ LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2013 12:22:00 PM
I love that you love the way I express this poem, Linda! ;)
Date: 5/3/2013 8:05:00 PM
Wow, this is a massively expressive write, a tremendous grandiosity with all effects! I truly loved reading this delightful and awesome poem this evening! I just love the tender words of your delightful piece, your in depth look at things shines greatly within this phenomenal write! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2013 12:18:00 PM
Russell...I'm so glad that you took the time to read and comment. Tender words and a tender heart are both things I cherish! :) Thank you for this wonderful post.
Date: 5/3/2013 7:55:00 PM
Is there anything left of your hubby or have you loved him all up? Haha...you are one ball of fire...:-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2013 12:14:00 PM
If only I could love him all up...I would! ;) Thanks, MD. Love ya!

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