when is love decrepit

will love be decrepit when
trust is just a word thrown when we cannot win fights,
an excuse rather than a gospel… or is it long before then?

will love be decrepit when
she is home waiting, and he is alone under neon lights,
both drinking, asking, “can we ever be in the same room again?”

when she cannot speak as chaos seep into her pen,
and he cannot sleep knowing they want different nights
when there's no words left to exchange, is love decrepit then?

will love be decrepit when
he tells lies to avoid explanations, and she overlooks them to avoid fights.
a facade of rose gold castle, but what comes after then?

the silence in the castle can blind us, when
we swallow our differences to avoid plights.
love doesn’t lie, but people in love do, is love decrepit then?

truth is never love’s friend, not when
love falters the minute truth bites.
when we ask “will love be decrepit when—”
—it's already decrepit then.
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Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 12:57 PM
- Congratulations on your win...lovely written, Jasmine :) - hugs
Tsai Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much <3
George Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 12:39 AM
You have cleverly enumerated many situations when love becomes decrepit. It is unfortunate that dissensions creep into the lives of men and women who were once happy partners in life. Beautifully written , dear Jasmine.
Tsai Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 1:09 AM
Thank you, Valsa. It is sad just thinking how easily love, once a passionate flame, can falter into nothing but ash, leaving only a facade. I truly hope no one has to experience this in their lives, yet Life himself is not a being we can control.
Parker Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:07 PM
Nicely done, Jasmine, your poem fits the prompt well... good luck in the contest and welcome to poetry soup...Frederic
Tsai Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Thank you for your compliment, Frederic! It means a lot to me <3
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