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When In Hana, Hawaii

Check out oheo pools And the bamboo forest Where the wind hums Through the bamboo Check out the water falls That flow with mica stars Check out koki beach Where locals & other surf Check out Haleakala crater Which is10,000 feet straight up Above cloud level & the view Is breath taking Say hi to my sister Aelana N tell her I love n miss her

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Date: 3/26/2009 12:57:00 PM
Sweet captures in your words
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:07:00 AM
I've never been to Hawaii, Leah, but your poem takes me there. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful journey!
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