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When In Hana, Hawaii

Check out oheo pools
And the bamboo forest
Where the wind hums
Through the bamboo

Check out the water falls
That flow with mica stars

Check out koki beach
Where locals & other surf

Check out Haleakala crater
Which is10,000 feet straight up
Above cloud level & the view
Is breath taking

Say hi to my sister Aelana
N tell her I love n miss her

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/26/2009 12:57:00 PM
Sweet captures in your words
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:07:00 AM
I've never been to Hawaii, Leah, but your poem takes me there. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful journey!
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