When In Hana, Hawaii
Check out oheo pools
And the bamboo forest
Where the wind hums
Through the bamboo
Check out the water falls
That flow with mica stars
Check out koki beach
Where locals & other surf
Check out Haleakala crater
Which is10,000 feet straight up
Above cloud level & the view
Is breath taking
Say hi to my sister Aelana
N tell her I love n miss her
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