Ashley Wisehart Poet I do not know?

When Im With You

When i'm with you
I get these feelings
These feelings are going to last
Because I have fallen
I have fallen fast

So catch me
because I need you
I need you in my life
You’re everything to me
And everything you’ll be

Promise me you won't leave me
Promise me you will care
I need someone to call
I need someone to catch me when I fall

You feel my stomach with butterflies- you always brighten my skies

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Robert Pettit January 9, 2011 at 8:12 PM Well, I'm glad to see you have written about something other than suicide. Please make the following suggested changes: 3rd line, change "feeling" to "feelings". 7th line, change "Cause" to "Because". Your last three lines should appear as: "You fill my stomach with butterflies-You always brighten my skies". Your poem will look much better after you make those changes.