When I'M Old

As we sat in silence,
in a room so dark and cold; 
a thought began to bother me,
and you weren't there for me to hold.

My skin began to sag,
my vision began to fade;
my thin hairline was barely there,
and I couldn't recognize my own face.

Bags under my eyes,
drooping under my chin;
wrinkles stretched from ear to ear,
and I could hardly spark a grin.

My arms were aged and underneath they hang,
there were calluses on my feet;
my legs were barley steady,
and time had damaged my speech.

My weight was hard on my knees,
I couldn't hear worth a lick;
I underestimated my cancer,
ignored it and became very sick.

Now I'm here in this hospital,
lying on this death stricken bed,
taking in my final breaths;
and I want you to hold my hand.

Look into my glossy eyes,
as my fragile skin becomes stiff and cold;
Remember the way we felt when we were young,
now I know for sure that you still love me when I'm old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 6:58 AM
so very sad but a true love! Light & Love
Goff Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Amanda I have seen these things too, just haven't been through it yet myself, I love this poem too! you are a very talented artist, if time permits peek at my poem 'old men's eyes' based on observation's of two old gentlemenI knew....Jim
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