When Im Dead and Gone

when i'm dead and gone; 
i'll be the wounds on your wrists, and i'll be the sketchy marks that reminds you how 
the blood was touching your skin when you thought you couldn't feel. 
i'll be the broken bottle next to your bed & i'll be the wine on the floor slipping through 
the cracks, searching for an escape. 
i'll be the red rose in a black vase standing in your living room, standing lonely, resting. 
resting in devotion, resting in the moonlight while my leaves are dying slowly. 
i'll be the cooling breeze blowing through your beautiful blonde elegant hair while the 
red sky is speaking passion & beauty. 
i'll be the sadness in your smile, but most of all; 
when i'm dead and gone, i'll be the joy at the center of your being knowing that my 
soul will live on forever and ever, in the good and the bad, and i'll be there, every 
morning. 
to kiss you awake with the sounds of nature and gentle sensation when the first rays of 
sun touches your skin.
and you'll apreciate me, for all that i am.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/2/2014 6:33:00 PM
Yovanny, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2014 8:25:00 AM
Yovanny, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/1/2014 1:19:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Yovanny - I choose your first great and deep written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Yovanny Andres
Date: 9/2/2014 6:09:00 AM
thanks for your kind words and warm welcome anne:]
Date: 9/1/2014 11:36:00 AM
An air of tragedy here, like someone looking at a comatose girlfriend or spouse. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Yovanny Andres
Date: 9/2/2014 6:08:00 AM
thanks daver:)
Date: 8/31/2014 10:08:00 AM
Wow, what an amazing and powerful poem. I would love to read more of your poems. :)
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Yovanny Andres
Date: 9/1/2014 5:53:00 AM
That's great, thankyou :D
Date: 8/31/2014 12:54:00 AM
Hi Yovanny, this is such a moving powerful write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings!
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Date: 9/1/2014 5:54:00 AM
thanks:))
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