When I'm

I want to be loved correctly 
Please don't neglect me 
Just let me 
Let me show you 
How you are supposed to be treated 
How to feel wanted and needed 
I want you to understand 
Everything I'm saying
So you can reciprocate 
What's been given 
What we doing it's your decision


True love 
Will the love be true 
Boy thats what i feel 
When im with you
(Repeat 1x)

A man that loves you 
It shows 
It's like a plant it grows 
Start from the bottom 
Aim for the top
You have all these options 
Just don't stop
Keep God first 
Stay in your word 
Pray everyday , keep the faith 
A team baby we sure make it great 

True love 
Will the love be true 
Boy thats what i feel 
When im with you
(Repeat 1x)

I want to vibe 
Enjoy spending time 
 You make me blush ??    this is true 
You need me and I need you 

True love 
Will the love be true 
Boy thats what i feel 
When im with you
(Repeat until chorus fades )

Written by Concetta Hardnett 
09/13/2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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