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When I Write

when I write i feel as if i can't stop when I write I sing my favorite song I feel happy I smile look around for awhile I feel the breeze bounce against my face my hair waving to the trees I think what a place the clouds space out the clear blue sky catches my eye i say to myself "WOW!" when i write I can hear and see the little parakeets chirp jumping up and down geacefully beautiful their wings flapping on top of leaves the day seems short the sun smiling down on me sending off its energy feels kind of happy when I write all of my feelings show it's like an ocean of emotion my life is my imagination this is me when i write

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Date: 3/24/2011 1:44:00 PM
Yes, yes, yes...this way for me too:) excellent write!
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Date: 3/24/2011 1:39:00 PM
When you write you make people like me happy... Extremely happy... I love this piece my dear friend... Excellent by all standards
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