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When I Was Young

When I was young I wondered why I couldn't reach up and touch the sky I thought I only had to grow tall I couldn't touch it because I was small But then I grew up And I came to understand The sky wasn't something you could touch with your hand My dreams of reaching the sky diminished And I felt my longing Was truly finished But now I find Since I've grown old My dreams have changed Not  raw and bold the longing wasn't wrong It was something true On a different plane what I needed to do
Reach to the very top Of my existence here Hold myself upright Hold this earth dear For the sky is such A beautiful thing Seen from down here It makes your heart sing

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Date: 2/11/2025 2:41:00 PM
Thank you for the honour of choosing my poems to put in your book. Sorry I haven't had much time to be on here, I miss the joy of reading other's flowing words and different perspectives. Thank you all so very much.
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Date: 6/23/2024 10:31:00 PM
Hello Aly.' Simplicty can be quite profound.' A great reminder to me of the sky of my youth.'
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Aly Bahr
Date: 6/23/2024 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Joe Maverick. We shouldn't lose sight of our dreams, we just need to adjust it to reality.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things