When I Was Young

When I was young
I wondered why
I couldn't reach up
and touch the sky
I thought I only
had to grow tall
I couldn't touch it
because I was small

But then I grew up
And I came to understand
The sky wasn't something
you could touch with your hand
My dreams of reaching
the sky diminished
And I felt my longing
Was truly finished

But now I find
Since I've grown old
My dreams have changed
Not  raw and bold
the longing wasn't wrong
It was something true
On a different plane
what I needed to do

Reach to the very top Of my existence here Hold myself upright Hold this earth dear For the sky is such A beautiful thing Seen from down here It makes your heart sing

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Date: 2/11/2025 2:41:00 PM
Thank you for the honour of choosing my poems to put in your book. Sorry I haven't had much time to be on here, I miss the joy of reading other's flowing words and different perspectives. Thank you all so very much.
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Date: 6/23/2024 10:31:00 PM
Hello Aly.' Simplicty can be quite profound.' A great reminder to me of the sky of my youth.'
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Aly Bahr
Date: 6/23/2024 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Joe Maverick. We shouldn't lose sight of our dreams, we just need to adjust it to reality.
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