When I Was Nine

My bedroom had two doors when I was nine
One opened into the hall that led to our living room and the other opened into the kitchen 
Sometimes the door to the kitchen was left open
In the beginning it was comforting listening to my parents' voices as I fell asleep
Then something happened and things went south real fast
I began to hear plates breaking against the wall and glasses smashing to the floor
Then one night amidst the yelling and the screaming 
A butcher's knife came sailing from the kitchen and stuck in the headboard of my bed
The knife was gone in the morning but the mark of the knife was still there
And I  began at such a young age
To sit with my back to the wall
Long before I was a solider  who one day went to war
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Arnone Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Savage. Sad. Raw. Is it common to have a bedroom open to both the kitchen and the living room? Strange, chilling story.
Allison Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 8:00 PM
I found the poem quite chilling Michael sadly children do witness such events and this effects them for the rest of their lives - great poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 8:56 PM
wow, what a dark poem and it is hard to believe this happened to you. Is it true? I was looking through my list of fave poets today and noticed your name and thought, heck, why doesn't that guy ever visit me any more? So here I am to say hello and I sure do like your poem.
Ainsley Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:44 PM
yes
Torres Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 8:22 AM
A very awesome and delightful poem! Merry christmas to you, my dear Michael.Just drop by to greet and wish you all a very merry christmas and a bountiful New Year!!..from your friendly poet,AiyaH ^_^
Sirak Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 6:39 AM
A brilliant write! If I could go higher than 7, I would. Sometimes a brief moment has a lifetime of impact. In your telling, the emotions jump off the page leaving the reader as stunned as the little boy.
Ainsley Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Vary kind ;thank you Monterey.
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