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When I Was In Portugal

When I was in Portugal, 
                                            I fell in love, 
                                     When I was in Spain, 
                               I felt that love all over again.

                                           Miraculous, 
                                            Charming, 
                                          Unbelievable! 

                               Where was all this love hidden
                                          For so long! 
                                I was desperate, I was crazy! 
            
                              All in my mind was one thought, 
                                            I love you, 
                                  I love you with everything -

                                     My joy, My happiness, 
                                    My sorrow, My sadness, 
                                        Everything is true, 
                                           Only with you!
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Brul Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 1:38 PM
This is a very passionate piece! I am inspired to write my own version haha..Splendid piece..Love is really a splendid thing. Congrats on your win!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 2:10 PM
Thanks, JCB. Sounds like you are a romantic too! I will look forward to reading your romantic poem. Love, Mala
Hamilton Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Very nice write Malabika enjoyed, congrats on a fine placement!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Thank you, John. Appreciate your kind words.
Horsman Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 9:45 AM
I love to read poetry, when taken on a journey, in which i find with this wonderful poem.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Thank you, Dear Friend. Such a beautiful compliment for my poem! So glad to know you enjoyed!
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