When I Was In Portugal

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When I was in Portugal, I fell in love, When I was in Spain, I felt that love all over again. Miraculous, Charming, Unbelievable! Where was all this love hidden For so long! I was desperate, I was crazy! All in my mind was one thought, I love you, I love you with everything - My joy, My happiness, My sorrow, My sadness, Everything is true, Only with you!

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Jcb Brul

Date: 6/18/2020 1:38:00 PM

This is a very passionate piece! I am inspired to write my own version haha..Splendid piece..Love is really a splendid thing. Congrats on your win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/18/2020 2:10:00 PM

Thanks, JCB. Sounds like you are a romantic too! I will look forward to reading your romantic poem. Love, Mala

John Hamilton

Date: 6/18/2020 11:08:00 AM

Very nice write Malabika enjoyed, congrats on a fine placement!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/18/2020 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, John. Appreciate your kind words.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/5/2020 9:45:00 AM

I love to read poetry, when taken on a journey, in which i find with this wonderful poem.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/5/2020 6:08:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Friend. Such a beautiful compliment for my poem! So glad to know you enjoyed!