When I Was In Love With You

It all started with a “hey” and a “hi” there was love in the sky
We both had one heart, one pulse, one reason to live
Everywhere I turned I saw reminders of you
I couldn’t sleep couldn’t write I saw destiny in view
I changed my clothes my looks I wanted to impress
My love was deep, deeper than any word could express
Every touch, every smile every gaze were like twin-stars
Every minute, every hour, everyday was like Christmas
And like morning dew on leaves the love faded away
It was fun while it lasted but now memories to slay
And from miles away we both see our love remains
Now my heart is empty I must find love again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Turner Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:18 AM
I think the down side of love is worse than the upside is good. I believe I'll stay single!
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Yes this poem is sad and very deep. I noticed this as I waw reading this poem. I enjoyed it.Sky Walker.
Walker Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 3:47 PM
Thank you Darlene, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Green Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 10:19 AM
This was very deep and sad in a way because I know this feeling, though I believe that was it for me, I won't be looking anymore. Thanks for sharing this.
Walker Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Its a pleasure Chris, I appreciate you review. Thanks
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace