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When I Was In Love With You

It all started with a “hey” and a “hi” there was love in the sky We both had one heart, one pulse, one reason to live Everywhere I turned I saw reminders of you I couldn’t sleep couldn’t write I saw destiny in view I changed my clothes my looks I wanted to impress My love was deep, deeper than any word could express Every touch, every smile every gaze were like twin-stars Every minute, every hour, everyday was like Christmas And like morning dew on leaves the love faded away It was fun while it lasted but now memories to slay And from miles away we both see our love remains Now my heart is empty I must find love again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/28/2017 8:18:00 AM
I think the down side of love is worse than the upside is good. I believe I'll stay single!
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Date: 2/27/2017 10:54:00 AM
Yes this poem is sad and very deep. I noticed this as I waw reading this poem. I enjoyed it.Sky Walker.
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Date: 2/28/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/27/2017 10:19:00 AM
This was very deep and sad in a way because I know this feeling, though I believe that was it for me, I won't be looking anymore. Thanks for sharing this.
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Date: 2/28/2017 3:40:00 PM
Its a pleasure Chris, I appreciate you review. Thanks

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