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When I Was Drawn To Dawn

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Used previously for Gregory Richard Barden's Liberum Divisa 8 Poetry Contest

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Slowly, a sliver of lemon meringue began coloring the horizon beyond my valley home. Drawn to dawn, I let myself succumb to the beauty of it all. Nov. 3, 2021

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/26/2022 7:22:00 AM

Beautiful, Andrea ~

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 6/9/2022 7:16:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest. “Slowly, a sliver of lemon meringue”~ ah, what wonderful imagery. :)Paulette

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/8/2022 6:27:00 PM

"a sliver of lemon meringue began coloring the horizon". Such a beautiful image indeed. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Simply breathtaking, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement in this contest. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/8/2022 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write and time of the day. Have a blessed day.....................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/8/2022 5:54:00 AM

Beautiful Andrea, “Slowly, a sliver of lemon meringue began coloring the horizon” love those words. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/7/2022 9:07:00 PM

Succumbing to the beauty. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/7/2022 6:36:00 PM

Lovely poem, Andrea! CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Mike Bayles

Date: 11/8/2021 9:50:00 PM

Very nice poem, Andrea. I especially like the first line.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/6/2021 5:48:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Andrea. Your lines have some great imagery. Blessings

Judy Ball

Date: 11/4/2021 7:42:00 AM

This is lovely Andrea. I really like it. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/4/2021 6:14:00 AM

Andrea, 'When I was Drawn to Dawn' - love your dawn. The Grand Canyon's edge calls to the timid. Unlike this poem, let's hope they never succumb to its beauty. -Richard

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/4/2021 2:00:00 AM

This is a contest I thoroughly hate. I never participate. But to each his own and you are clever to chose an exquisite extract. Best for a win. Hugs.