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When I was a Lad
by Bob Moore

I still remember, when I was a lad
the head of the house, was the one we called dad
he’d go off to work, and mam would keep house
look after the kids, be quiet as a mouse

He’d come home when shift ended, and sit in his chair
wasn’t much said, cuppa tea waiting there
mam did all the washing, the cleaning and such
no TV, no internet, not very much

Sometimes, if she had to, a part time job she’d get
selling tickets at Belle Vue, or maybe the Met
or at the Apollo, in Ardwick Green
the Hippodrome too, some stars there, she’d seen

or the Midland Hotel, up on Hyde road
to make a quid, and pay what we owed
us kids didn’t know this, we all just played
and if mam and dad worked, at the neighbours we stayed

we knew all the neighbours, and we would just roam
until the street lights came on, then we’d go home
mam would be waiting, or sometimes  it was dad
I remember those times, when I was a lad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/29/2017 8:31:00 AM
Bob, I'm fast becoming a big fan of your work. The beautiful simplicity you weave is really well done. I am not of-the opinion that the more adjective laden a piece the better. You say what needs to said so beautifully easily...
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Robert J Moore
Date: 1/29/2017 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, not with fancy, but with feeling my friend
Date: 8/28/2016 9:05:00 PM
Oh, Bob - so nostalgic. Kids aren't out until dark or dinner like when we both grew up, that phase of life has completely altered. They may not grow up knowing if their parents would wait for them. Your Mom was very dedicated. Your words touched me and my own nostalgic feelings, so bittersweet ... I enjoyed and your poem definitely works ... CayCay
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Date: 8/28/2016 8:46:00 PM
I enjoyed your poetry. Well done!
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Robert J Moore
Date: 8/28/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thank you

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