When I Was

When I was

when i was one year old
i was very bold,
when i turned two
i lost my shoes
then i turned three
and got stung by a bee
when i was four
I want to the store and felt very bored,
Then I turned five
And learned to dive,
When I got six
I learned to fix,
Then I turned Seven
and wished to eleven,
But i turned eight
And got a team mate,
Nine is the number
That caught me in trouble,
Ten followed nine
With  a   wisdom full mind
And  now i am Eleven
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December 8, 2024 at 11:11 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 17, 2016 at 12:21 AM
mohsin farooq lone, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 14, 2016 at 9:56 PM
MOHSIN, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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April 6, 2011 at 10:02 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today mohsin. I hope to get back soon to read more. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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