Des Juan Richardson Poet Free verse

When I (Unconditionally)

When I think of you, I want to speak to you
When I talk to you, I wish to see you
When our eyes connect, I long to kiss you
When our kiss concludes, I desperately miss you
When I express my feelings, I expose myself to you
When I share my thoughts, I feel much closer to you
When our hands meet, I sensually anticipate you
When our bodies fuse, I emotionally escape with you
When I am not in your presence, I place my trust in you
When I am tested vigorously, I unconditionally love you



{Des Juan Marquise}

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Debbie Guzzi March 31, 2010 at 11:35 AM such a provocative write you should ry it without the "When I's" for who else would be speaking & then others can more easily imagine themselves in your place! We miss you!!! Light & Love

Deneen White June 21, 2009 at 9:49 AM as usual you pull me into your writes, it gives one a sense of peace and tranqulity, take care D-nyce

Deneen White June 21, 2009 at 9:48 AM hi Des Juan, good to hear from you again as you can see I have not been on the soup for a while, I have been busy going back to school still writing, but i have not actually posted any poems in the soup lately, thanks for your generous comments, they mean alot, how have you been, I hope that everything is well with you, how is your son, well I hope, I bet you are still a workaholic, lol take care D-nyce

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 11, 2009 at 4:58 AM Love this one!espacially the lines:"When our eyes connect, I long to kiss you When our kiss concludes, I desperately miss you " It tells so much!Gone to my favs!:)

Charlene Bird June 5, 2009 at 1:20 PM Des Jaun, this is softly touching, and I am sure that special one knows she is special with your talented words that sings from the page. Thank you for your kind comments always.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen June 5, 2009 at 1:33 AM Des Juan, This tribute to your love is sweetly special. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

Brandy Megens June 4, 2009 at 1:39 PM so sweet and romantic you are a gentleman and a nice poet thanks for the comment