When I Think of You Ifl

When you were no more

I felt a distance.
That of absolute solitude
Like lost stars within infinities
That have both petrified and imploded.

I felt like ice.
Frozen, stunned and vaguely shedding.
In a sea of torrents of sorrows and bitter emptiness

I felt like 
The biggest part of me ran off without a goodbye or sign thereof.
To never land
Like I was falling
And I would never land.

I felt like
You
You were that part of me.
That magnified my being.
Made me feel more than and not equal to or less.

And now alas

I feel imaginary, insolvable, the square root of a negative value.
A little less than nothing
A little more than stagnant

This is.

When I think of you

And

You are not.

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Date: 2/22/2023 6:51:00 AM
- A lovely poem - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2023 4:05:00 AM
Great write, Skaidiv. I can relate to this, my friend. Congrats on your win! Charlie
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Skaidiv Morjin
Date: 2/21/2023 4:28:00 AM
Many thanks, sometimes its hard to write from the heart cause you stunned by so many memories and emotion
Date: 2/20/2023 8:32:00 PM
"Like lost stars within infinities", "I felt like ice" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Skaidiv Morjin
Date: 2/21/2023 4:32:00 AM
Thank you, this is how I feel somedays when I think about ones that are gone too soon, one you wish you could have just one more day with
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