When I Sit Quietly

-The feeling of listen to the piano music "Voice of Compassion"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4UlZyuFiGks&feature=related


When I sit quietly
I could see my heart
My heart is gentle and delicate
Accompanied by the soft music
Dancing between the piano keys

I am caressing my heart
Touching my face
My face suffused with a charming light flush
My smile bloosms in the charm  
such as  roses blooming on the piano 
Such as cloves floating in the streams 

My poetry in my fingers pondering
The wonderful music
With my poetry flying
As  gently flowing clouds
In the morning after the rain
Kissing  the dreamlike rainbow 

I hear the legend Pianist playing on the ocean 
I see the beautiful face of a girl appearing in the sea 
I feel the charming deaf  piano lady kissing the waves
With her playing deeply from her heart 
Are full of passion and love 
like beautiful roses bloosm on the piano 
Those petals that  between piano keys 
lightly drop upon my heart 

I am navigating my boat 
My fingers are weaving a dream cloth for  my poetry
My boat is floating  on the faraway centre ocean 
Loaded with all romance 
Drifting away 

I am sitting quietly, facing toward the sea
My lips are dancing among the petals 
My heart 
Never pure as this moment 
Turning to  a wave of mist
Into the sky
Gone with the wind

02/Jan/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/2/2016 4:20:00 AM
Oh wow I love how you wrote this poem, it flows very well, with all sorts of imagery. I see myself in this poem! Powerful write and nicely written! :) Great Job
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Yunyan Gu
Date: 1/4/2016 4:22:00 AM
Thank you, cheers for the new year 2016:)
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