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When I see your eyes My l i f e l i g h t s u p Throughout this world, you come a c r o s s many people But none, none, none, come along like y o u G i v e me your hand Take our love to new highs Take it so, so, high, here we go Love, take us a w a y for a long, long t i m e May you whisper your love to me, tonight Carry me a w a y T a k e me near your h e a r t With soft kisses, blows against my lips When I see your eyes When I see your eyes

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Date: 12/26/2024 7:11:00 AM
lovely romantic poem, well written. J
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Paul Murray
Date: 12/26/2024 12:56:00 PM
https://suno.com/song/63c696de-29bc-4f91-a616-ee6d0f63efea The song from this poem is at the above site
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Paul Murray
Date: 12/26/2024 12:14:00 PM
The song version of this poem will be out shortly. I think you’ll really enjoy it in music.
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Paul Murray
Date: 12/26/2024 7:24:00 AM
Thank you. I have mostly gone over to Suno since I felt I was writing lyrics more than anything. https://suno.com/invite/@pm_angstsgrunge

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