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When I Saw You

when i saw you i caught my breath had to gather what was left when i saw you all the memories started flooding back the laughs the fun walks on the train tracks when i saw you i asked my self if it was worth it falling down for you hit after hit when i saw you my vison became blurred with my tears for i have not seen that smile for years when i saw you i wanted to scream how could you do this to me when i saw you i wanted to fall to the ground and never get up because the wound on this heart had a bigger cut when i saw you my life was in the right place, finally your unwanted goodbye did not settle mildly when i saw you all i could say was nothing all i know was that something some one was holding me back like they had the whole time you left my world pitch black what can i say thats always your way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/27/2009 5:57:00 AM
Terrific write Autumn, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 8/27/2009 4:14:00 AM
You have come full circle in this poem. Outstanding. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 7:26:00 PM
It is hard to erase the memory of a young love and the pain of its loss, but perhaps now having come to term, that it wasn't meant to be. A very nice write. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 8/26/2009 5:33:00 PM
Young love, must be, cool poem tho.Lol, Sincerely Moses
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