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When I Pray

When I pray, I pray for my body,
for the sporadic attacks of arthritis 
to cease and desist, or at least lessen 
so I don't feel like I am back in time
to the Inquisition....

I pray for my mind, that it stays sharp,
sharp enough to be able to think and
write and listen and hope--but also 
that God takes away (far away!)
my mean thoughts, the petty dreams 
of my ego, the soul's persistent enemy....

Most important, as I learned as a very
careless young man, are my relentless 
prayers for that endless part of me,
my soul-- for what else will ever see
the eye of Eternity?

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/21/2021 9:40:00 AM

"That endless part of me" - what a great way to describe the soul, LJ. Each stanza is filled with the wisdom and impactful creativity articulated in your prayers. Congratulations on your win. Keeping you in my prayers. Blessings!

L. J. Carber
Date: 8/22/2021 10:49:00 AM

Thanks Sam--I am much appreciative-- go with God always!

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/20/2021 9:30:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your wisdom, expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

L. J. Carber
Date: 8/22/2021 10:48:00 AM

Thanks Beata, and may God be with you forever!

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 8/5/2021 6:50:00 PM

There comes a time in a life when interests, goals and games trend away from the physical and towards the cerebral and spiritual; at least that’s what I keep telling myself. Your wise words impress as always, Len.

L. J. Carber
Date: 8/7/2021 10:14:00 AM

Thanks Geoff, though the wisdom, as all wisdom, was not cheaply,nor easily bought-- I feel for those who see only this world, this life, as the only 'reality'...and getting old, one either retreats or expands....

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 8/5/2021 6:50:00 PM

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/27/2021 11:11:00 AM

I read somewhere that if you cut potatoes put them in water overnight and drink that water first thing in morning, arthritis goes away. An age-old remedy, website told. Arthoherb oil is also very effective. See if you can purchase online. A wonderful outpouring of emotions which most not only old but even middle aged would understand. Take care, God bless!

L. J. Carber
Date: 6/30/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thanks for the kind advice, Rama-- go with God always!