When I Met You

When I Met You
My beloved, heaven gifted your heart to me in the silence of a golden sunrise, divinely cradled on ripples of clouds and pillowed on a bed of blue bells, dripping with the kisses of a new day. When I saw you, my heart fluttered like a menagerie of a thousand doves, silver wings quivering on the palette of a vermillion splashed sunset. Like a hungry hummingbird, I craved to sip sweet nectar from your lips and to live on the essence of your love.
06-22-2018 Contest: Seven Lines of Romantic Heaven Sponsor: Silent One Placement: 1st
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B. Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Such a charming romanticism, dear friend.. Had me feeling so delightful and enchanted reading this beauty.. Another one of your treasures! Blessings!!
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August 10, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Hi Robertina, my dear friend, thank you so very much for your wonderful, heartfelt compliments that mean the world to me! Hugs and love. Pandita
Juman Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 10:02 PM
indeed you are very, very romantic my dear. excellent write ----Love you
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August 1, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Dear Al, it is wonderful to receive your superlative, complimentary words, my friend! Thank you ever so much! Have a beautiful day! Love and hugs. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Thanks for what you said to me below. For noticing I was not on the list. I wish I could find a poem of yours to read but I keep clicking on ones I already commented to. Anyway, thanks for your comment on my poem and have a great weekend.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 11:28 PM
You are most welcome, Andie! I'll try to post a new poem soon, right now I'm rather busy with various projects. Hugs and love. Pandita
Warrior Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:33 AM
I think you could call yourself a true poet with this enchanting beautifully expressed verse Pandita...Congrats on your superb win...love & light...^WW^
Sietesantos Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Hi WW, thank you for your superlative complimentary words that I truly appreciate! You made my day in a big way! Have a beautiful weekend, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
Messina Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Love this Pandita, many congrats on your win win this gem...Hugs // Charlie
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June 28, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Hi Charlie, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and lovely compliments! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Back with Big Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Hi Eve, many thanks for your lovely congratulations which I appreciate! Hope you had a nice day! Hugs. Pandita
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Congrats, Pandita!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Hi Kim, thank you so much for your congratulatory words! Hugs. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Congrats, Pandita. I entered mine in the contest, but somehow it never made it into the contest. I don't even see it in my member area as an N/A. It just vanished from his contest. (bums me out)
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June 27, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Hi Andie, thank you so very much, my friend. I was puzzled when I didn't see you on the winners list; and I am so sorry that your lovely poem did not appear in the contest because it would most certainly have been a big winner! Love and hugs. Pandita
Ajmal Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Such a beautiful poem it is, truly a joy to read, many congratulations on your win in the contest, it is indeed a beauty
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Hi Faraz, I am happy that you enjoyed reading this special piece! Thank you so much and have a wonderful day! Hugs. Pandita
Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:32 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful romantic poem. Well done!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Hi Susan, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:24 PM
and another WOW....congrats on the top placement
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much, my friend John! Your compliments mean a lot to me and truly brightened my day! Hugs. Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Wow Pandita! This is spectacular! You have outdone yourself on this one! Congratulations on your wonderful first place win. I love this piece! : )
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Dear Connie, it is wonderful to receive your superlative, complimentary words, my friend! Thank you ever so much! Have a beautiful day! Love and hugs. Pandita
Sharma Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations! What a beautiful description!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Hi Mansi, I truly appreciate your kind congratulations and support! Thank you so much for stopping by! Warmest regards. Pandita
Cunningham Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Back with congratulations Pandita, well deserved top spot. Tom
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! Your compliments mean a lot to me! Hugs. Pandita
Flower Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:30 AM
A well-deserved win. Congratulations! :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Hi Moon Flower, thank you for visiting and I appreciate your kind support and congratulatory words, my friend! All the best! Hugs. Pandita
Chakrabarty Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Pandita, congratulations on your win. God bless the muse. Regards.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Thank you so much, my friend Rajat! Your compliments mean a lot to me and truly brightened my day! Hugs. Pandita
Kitchin Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Awesome poem, congratulations on your win!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Hi Tania, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much appreciate your support! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
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June 25, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Delicious poetry soup Pandita! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Hi Maureen, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Talbot Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Seven lines of romantic bliss! Congratulations on your first place Pandita, Mick
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June 25, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Hi Mike, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments. Thank you so very much for your support! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Pett Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Pandita, exceptional piece of poetry a joy to read. :))
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Hi Roy, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this special piece! Thank you so much and have a wonderful day! Hugs. Pandita
Sathasivam Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Excellent. Lovely romantic write. Thanks for sharing it.
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June 25, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Hi Ravi, I so appreciate your kind compliments! Thank you so much, my friend! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Sands Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations for your win Pandita :)
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June 25, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Hi Heidi, thank you so much for your kind congratulatory words! Have a nice day! hugs. Pandita
Man Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Pandita.. your romantic write is yummy. Like tasting honey it reads with arousing pleasure!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Awwww, thank you so much! Your compliments warms my heart! Love and hugs. Pandita
Gondolf Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Pandita, this is so beautiful. Congrats for the well deserved first place! John
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June 25, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Thank you so very much, John! I appreciate your kind words! Have a great day! Hugs. Pandita
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:53 AM
I am so glad to see you win at the top of the podium, Pandita..a well deserving win for a talented creator. Awesome, my friend!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Hi Vijay, thank you so very much for your sweet, always supportive words! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
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