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When I Met You

When I Met You
My beloved, heaven gifted your heart to me in the silence of a golden sunrise, divinely cradled on ripples of clouds and pillowed on a bed of blue bells, dripping with the kisses of a new day. When I saw you, my heart fluttered like a menagerie of a thousand doves, silver wings quivering on the palette of a vermillion splashed sunset. Like a hungry hummingbird, I craved to sip sweet nectar from your lips and to live on the essence of your love.
06-22-2018 Contest: Seven Lines of Romantic Heaven Sponsor: Silent One Placement: 1st

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Date: 8/9/2018 4:51:00 PM
Such a charming romanticism, dear friend.. Had me feeling so delightful and enchanted reading this beauty.. Another one of your treasures! Blessings!!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/10/2018 2:06:00 PM
Hi Robertina, my dear friend, thank you so very much for your wonderful, heartfelt compliments that mean the world to me! Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 7/31/2018 10:02:00 PM
indeed you are very, very romantic my dear. excellent write ----Love you
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/1/2018 4:29:00 PM
Dear Al, it is wonderful to receive your superlative, complimentary words, my friend! Thank you ever so much! Have a beautiful day! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/29/2018 9:16:00 PM
Thanks for what you said to me below. For noticing I was not on the list. I wish I could find a poem of yours to read but I keep clicking on ones I already commented to. Anyway, thanks for your comment on my poem and have a great weekend.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/29/2018 11:28:00 PM
You are most welcome, Andie! I'll try to post a new poem soon, right now I'm rather busy with various projects. Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 6/29/2018 9:33:00 AM
I think you could call yourself a true poet with this enchanting beautifully expressed verse Pandita...Congrats on your superb win...love & light...^WW^
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/29/2018 1:35:00 PM
Hi WW, thank you for your superlative complimentary words that I truly appreciate! You made my day in a big way! Have a beautiful weekend, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/28/2018 7:19:00 AM
Love this Pandita, many congrats on your win win this gem...Hugs // Charlie
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/28/2018 11:06:00 AM
Hi Charlie, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and lovely compliments! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/27/2018 8:15:00 PM
Back with Big Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:53:00 PM
Hi Eve, many thanks for your lovely congratulations which I appreciate! Hope you had a nice day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/26/2018 6:56:00 PM
Congrats, Pandita!
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:52:00 AM
Hi Kim, thank you so much for your congratulatory words! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/26/2018 5:35:00 PM
Congrats, Pandita. I entered mine in the contest, but somehow it never made it into the contest. I don't even see it in my member area as an N/A. It just vanished from his contest. (bums me out)
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:51:00 AM
Hi Andie, thank you so very much, my friend. I was puzzled when I didn't see you on the winners list; and I am so sorry that your lovely poem did not appear in the contest because it would most certainly have been a big winner! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/26/2018 6:47:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem it is, truly a joy to read, many congratulations on your win in the contest, it is indeed a beauty
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Date: 6/27/2018 10:08:00 AM
Hi Faraz, I am happy that you enjoyed reading this special piece! Thank you so much and have a wonderful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 11:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful romantic poem. Well done!
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Date: 6/27/2018 10:19:00 AM
Hi Susan, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 6:24:00 PM
and another WOW....congrats on the top placement
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Date: 6/27/2018 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend John! Your compliments mean a lot to me and truly brightened my day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 5:44:00 PM
Wow Pandita! This is spectacular! You have outdone yourself on this one! Congratulations on your wonderful first place win. I love this piece! : )
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Date: 6/27/2018 10:05:00 AM
Dear Connie, it is wonderful to receive your superlative, complimentary words, my friend! Thank you ever so much! Have a beautiful day! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations! What a beautiful description!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 4:20:00 PM
Hi Mansi, I truly appreciate your kind congratulations and support! Thank you so much for stopping by! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 12:30:00 PM
Back with congratulations Pandita, well deserved top spot. Tom
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 12:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! Your compliments mean a lot to me! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 11:30:00 AM
A well-deserved win. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/25/2018 11:33:00 AM
Hi Moon Flower, thank you for visiting and I appreciate your kind support and congratulatory words, my friend! All the best! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 11:13:00 AM
Pandita, congratulations on your win. God bless the muse. Regards.
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Date: 6/25/2018 11:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend Rajat! Your compliments mean a lot to me and truly brightened my day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 10:53:00 AM
Awesome poem, congratulations on your win!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 11:03:00 AM
Hi Tania, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your lovely compliments! I very much appreciate your support! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 9:46:00 AM
Delicious poetry soup Pandita! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo!
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Date: 6/25/2018 9:51:00 AM
Hi Maureen, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 9:05:00 AM
Seven lines of romantic bliss! Congratulations on your first place Pandita, Mick
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 9:48:00 AM
Hi Mike, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments. Thank you so very much for your support! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Pandita, exceptional piece of poetry a joy to read. :))
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 9:40:00 AM
Hi Roy, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this special piece! Thank you so much and have a wonderful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 8:14:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely romantic write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/25/2018 9:45:00 AM
Hi Ravi, I so appreciate your kind compliments! Thank you so much, my friend! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Pandita :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 9:33:00 AM
Hi Heidi, thank you so much for your kind congratulatory words! Have a nice day! hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 7:16:00 AM
Pandita.. your romantic write is yummy. Like tasting honey it reads with arousing pleasure!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 9:26:00 AM
Awwww, thank you so much! Your compliments warms my heart! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 7:00:00 AM
Pandita, this is so beautiful. Congrats for the well deserved first place! John
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much, John! I appreciate your kind words! Have a great day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/25/2018 6:53:00 AM
I am so glad to see you win at the top of the podium, Pandita..a well deserving win for a talented creator. Awesome, my friend!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2018 9:16:00 AM
Hi Vijay, thank you so very much for your sweet, always supportive words! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
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