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When I Look At You

When I look at you By morning’s light I see so many Wondrous things Before my eyes A rising sun Of golden glow On amber clouds In early skies A morning glory Waking up To greet the day In shades of blue A breeze now swaying Through the leaves An emerald lawn Of glistened dew A butterfly In happy flight Enjoying nectar Fresh and free A robin tending To her young A squirrel And a bumble bee Of all the things That I may see Which come alive My morning view My favorite site Will always be The beauty when I look at you Good morning Soupers

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/16/2017 4:06:00 PM

Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, passionate, sweet love poem in every way:) Very captivating! Just awesome!:) I truly enjoyed reading this one again from you Chris! A 7 + ! A fav.And thanks so much for sharing !:) For sure, I'll be back and continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:)) D

Chris Green
Date: 6/16/2017 5:19:00 PM

Thank you so very much for your kindness.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/30/2017 11:47:00 AM

Nothing compares to the beauty of love .... but a poem to your loved one saying they are THE most beautiful and nothing can compare ....... very lovely Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/30/2017 11:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Lenna. You are right, nothing compares at all. I am happy you liked this one.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/30/2017 12:39:00 AM

So beautiful. Good morning to you Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 5/30/2017 11:54:00 AM

Good morning Elizabeth. Thank you so much.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/29/2017 7:46:00 PM

Good morning to you too Chris. What a pleasant write....

Chris Green
Date: 5/30/2017 8:37:00 AM

Good morning Pashang. Thank you so much for your nice comment

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/29/2017 6:51:00 PM

And when I find your words...It shows somebody cares,to take away our blue,that is when I look at you... :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/30/2017 8:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Your kind thoughts are always appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/29/2017 3:46:00 PM

A plethora of beautiful images!

Chris Green
Date: 5/30/2017 8:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/29/2017 9:40:00 AM

This is a bright and special write. Thanks for sharing Chris. :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thank you so very much Heidi.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/29/2017 8:44:00 AM

Love does make us see things in a different light. Have a great morn.

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 10:34:00 AM

It sure does, Thanks so much Tim.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/29/2017 8:40:00 AM

We are on the same wave length, I wrote one with the same title a while back, similar sentiment, but I like yours better! Have a great day!

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend for your kind thoughts.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2017 7:32:00 AM

- When I read you ... you light up my day :) - Good morning Chris ... best wishes for a wonderful day :) - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend, that is a such nice thing to say to me

Darren White

Date: 5/29/2017 7:09:00 AM

Good morning Chris, nice to see you.I love it how you always see the one you love in everything around you. I like it when you write in this form especially, with these short but very poetic and metrical sentences that sing in my heart.

Darren White
Date: 5/29/2017 11:41:00 AM

Haha, just so you know: pre-20 are the best ;)

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 10:33:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren for your kind (pre-20) words. : )