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WHEN I LOOK AT YOU

Intimacy is trust Intimacy is comfort When I look at you I see these things in me I see you in me I want you to see me in you When I look at you I feel your comfort I feel your trust Trust doesn’t need to ask It embraces instead When I look at you I embrace with pleasure Your soul, your body, your love I look to love (©nov 6th 2014)

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Date: 1/21/2019 8:10:00 PM
How odd... I read this again and was astounded. I went to comment and realized I already had. These words make me weep, make me feel again what I used to have.
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David Byrne
Date: 1/21/2019 10:22:00 PM
WOW, I'm glad I could make you feel something but sad that you feel the loss.
Date: 4/9/2015 10:08:00 PM
"Trust doesn’t need to ask It embraces instead".... so true, and written so beautifully. I enjoyed reading this intimate piece. Awesome job! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/23/2014 10:04:00 PM
this is beautiful
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