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When I Look at you

When I look at you, you make we weak. Can this be real that you are mine? Looking into your blue eyes I get butterflies and can't even speak. When I look at you, you make me weak. Silently praying for you when you are asleep. At times the happiness runs down my cheeks, and you say please don't weep. When I look at you, you make me weak. Can this be real that you are mine?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/27/2024 6:41:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.