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When I Look At My Past

WHEN I LOOK AT MY PAST I see a stranger looking back at me As if haunted by bad decisions Children in the playground Spinning furiously on the merry-go-round Old ladies with stern looks Faces like Cabbage Patch dolls Where have I been all those lost years Wandering aimlessly in a sea of alcohol 18 September 2019 For the contest sponsored by Ironic Zink

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2020 12:49:00 PM

Awesome poem, Curtis.

Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 11/6/2019 11:14:00 PM

A touching poem. Please read my new poem SILENT MORN. Thanks.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/18/2019 4:44:00 PM

Well Written Curtis, good luck in the contest!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 9/18/2019 8:03:00 PM

Thank you, Timothy! Good to hear from you?

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/18/2019 3:59:00 PM

oh wow...brilliantly penned, good thing you aren't lost in that sea now....enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest! :)

Curtis Moorman
Date: 9/18/2019 8:02:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra! I have made a note to remind me to set aside a time to read some of your work. I was intrigued by what I read so far. Thanks for your comment and support.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/18/2019 6:17:00 AM

Best wishes for a win. Thank God you are not where you once were!. Blessings, Panagiota Romios

Curtis Moorman
Date: 9/18/2019 3:48:00 PM

Thank you, Panagiota! I thank Him every day for my continued sobriety, and other Blessings He bestows on me. I appreciate your support.