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When I lay my first kiss

I heard the rustle of the wind I heard the laughter of the frond I felt the calm of the night I smelt the fragrance of the flower They worked on my heart in gentle promptings: love muses of the night they worked on her as on me And in the harmony of things I saw desire rose in her eyes I saw her lips trembling And I moved on: I lay my first kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/3/2016 11:20:00 PM
Abraham,,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2016 4:16:00 PM
Hello Abraham, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing skat
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Date: 5/28/2012 11:12:00 PM
Wow pretty cool. you have great poem's
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