Abraham Tor Poet Blank verse

When I Lay My First Kiss

I heard the 
rustle of 
the wind
I heard the 
laughter of 
the frond
I felt the 
calm of the 
night
I smelt the 
fragrance 
of the 
flower
They 
worked on 
my heart 
in gentle 
promptings: 
love muses 
of the night

they 
worked on 
her as on 
me
And in the 
harmony 
of things
I saw 
desire rose 
in her eyes
I saw her 
lips 
trembling
And I 
moved on:
I lay my 
first kiss

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Beata Agustin December 1, 2024 at 11:46 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 3, 2016 at 11:20 PM Abraham,,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 10, 2016 at 4:16 PM Hello Abraham, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing skat

Julia Chebukina May 28, 2012 at 11:12 PM Wow pretty cool. you have great poem's