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When I Have a Vision

I'm in my own little world of fantasies Dreaming is what i'm up to I'm with my love, sitting by the seaside Talking and holding hands I dont want it to end But i wake up suddenly To find myself smiling and happy That is when i have a vision. I'm back to my world of fantasy All alone looking for him by the seaside The earth begins to tremble I'm all shaken up and anxious I don't know what to do, I shout and scream The earth is swallowing me up Panic..... I'm awake on my bed Sweating profusely and crying badly This is also a vision but i conclude Its a nightmare!

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Date: 7/28/2011 10:54:00 AM
Wonderful creative writing today Rereloluwa. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 5:40:00 PM
very good expressions, good poetry, good subject matter. i like a lot
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