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When I Go

And when I die I say I will take my own path I will not walk down I will climb upwards where the light words are where unfinished sentences are tied to ribbons and I will stitch them together To make a meaning of the life I lived. © Gry W Christensen

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Robert Nehls

Date: 7/27/2014 8:59:00 AM

Very nice poem, Gry. Stitching together unfinished sentences, very creative. I enjoyed this one.... Robert.

Gry Christensen
Date: 7/27/2014 3:20:00 PM

Hello Robert, thank you very much for your kind words and time spent reading. I am glad you like it. I like a colourful language so I am very fond of metaphors and symbolism. :) I see to my horror that about 2/3 of my feedback on your poem somehow has been "erased". I am very sorry! I've no idea why, other than I've had some trouble with my pc and this site lately. I basically said that I really enjoyed your poem and that I also will be reading more of your poems.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/24/2014 1:33:00 PM

I love this write.. You write amazing free verse my friend!! pm on the way to you..

Gry Christensen
Date: 7/24/2014 11:48:00 PM

Hi again Robert, thanks so very much! Thank your for the very nice feedback, for your time spent and the help. Much appreciated! :) All the best, Gry