When I Finally Broke

I have been defeated 
My battle cry transfigured into silent tears rolling down my cheeks 
My middle finger morphed into a fist
Which changed into busted knuckles 
Then nails digging into my skin to hold myself back from screaming 
Now a fragile hand
Reaching for something...
Anything 

Offered a knife
Then cut open with the word pathetic 

Everyone that promised to fight for me betrayed me 
Without the decency to do it 
While I was watching..no
I suppose the golden rule is wait until someone's back is turned
Then screw them over
(I'll have to remember that)

Now I just don't believe in love and friendship
They're both nasty lies someone told me 
Made me believe 
To make me look weak 
Since he left 
No one else who has tried to take his place has managed to mean a thing to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/4/2015 3:18:00 PM
"Very powerful pen Kearra! Your piece is so profound, and sad, my dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love n hugs! xxx D."
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Kearra Kramer
Date: 2/5/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thank you, dear! There will be plenty more where that came from! I'll have to check out some of your work as well
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