When I Faced Monsters

Written: June 20, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Anoucheka Gangabissoon *************** They rose from the stygian seam of night— a labyrinthine legion, leering with spite. Their voices are a clangor, a caterwaul choir, breathe a windy haze, with eyes as molten fire. I saw in their faces the archetype dread, the chimera of grief, the brood of the dead. They came with avidity, eager to rend— to tear me asunder, to fetch me to wend. I stood beleaguered, though weary and wan, My spirit is a dulcet aurora at dawn— I polished a piece of cloth, a slight deed. But it glimmered with mettle and creed. Countless are beasts; masks are ever clean, They tempt with color, deceive in the scene. But kindness, though fragile, is empyrean flame, an ephemeral elixir that none can defame— They writhed in grayness and rasped in despair, Their susurrous curses dissolved in the air. For even in ruin, in sorrow’s wide store— a hand that still cares is the myth we implore. So I met them with silence, scorn, and a smile, each step through their terror a capacious trial. And though they remain in the corners of lore— I walk with the knowledge: they ruled me before.
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George Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 3:11 AM
There are many monsters living within us. Though they are fierce and have the power to tear you asunder, you met them with silence and a smile knowing they don't have the power to harm you anymore though they ruled you before. Great poem. Congratulations on your top win, dear friend.
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June 21, 2026 at 7:37 AM
You have expressed the inner battle with darkness, perfectly and so poetically... Through your words you have created gothic and nightmarish imagery that i think the sponsor will enjoy... many will relate to the struggles you highlight in your poem... All the best in the contest..
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June 20, 2026 at 5:36 PM
I loved the imagery this portrayed.
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June 20, 2026 at 5:25 PM
such intense words and vivid imagery -- a masterful creation worthy of the contest win.
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June 20, 2026 at 4:04 PM
lovely imagery, so few know their monsters, you use a very "sophisticated " language, which create specific emotion, how much enjoyable, thanks poet Sotto
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