Carly Larkin Poet Rhyme

When I Dream

When I dream,  

I temporarily lose my mind- 

And when I wake, I often wish I could rewind-time- 

Explore the depths of the undefined- 

In the madness of my mind; 

In a world where I am no longer confined.       

When I dream, 

I cross the barrier of my fears- 

Sometimes awoken in tears; 

Off and on for years. 




When I dream, 

my subconscious will awaken; 

My sanitys preservation-  

Internal restoration, 

Through silent contemplation.

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Wendy Meyer February 22, 2014 at 6:28 PM carly! hi!...I wonder why this has few visits and void of visible uplifting comments..?...i'll think of this poem of yours when Dream visits me tonight :-) I love the rhyming! I wish I were good in making rhymes with my work...this poem is something to dream about..:-) .. well-penned..(I left a new reply to your comment in my box under my old work "drunk love"..thank you)... .~wendy.