When I Die

When I die-
Let the earth split in two,
Let the animals scream as one,
Let the birds cease their songs,
So that my passing may be marked.

When I die-
Let the sky rend itself,
Let the thunder shout in grief,
Let the clouds shed their tears,
So that my passing may be mourned.

When I die-
Let a wail go up among the people,
Let the music of life falter,
Let pain stab the hearts of all,
So that my passing may be felt.

When I die-
Let my work live on,
Let my legacy be lived,
Let my heirlooms be passed down,
So that my life may be worth something.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Deo Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 3:55 PM
congrats for this "imprecatory poem or psalm," that boldly seeks significance beyond the grave. If death is the end, it would mock everything we do and invent here. Yet ...
White Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 2:07 AM
What a beautiful poem... the repeating lines make it so powerful! Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
Melodia Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 3:43 PM
Thanks! It's one of my first poems, so a bit of an experiment. I'll keep the repeating lines in mind ^.^
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