When I Die

When I die
The whole world will cry
The flower stop to smell a day
no Sunrise and shining 
moon in the sky
So sad was Cat and rat
even the holy grass.

No river moved an inch
No rain drop  fall
Breeze was so high 
with a hot mist to witness
a new winter's tale

The workers teared 
among is my father 
and my child,
my friends came there
to console, my rivals
already become mad

So much happened 
that day, still lot to say
But except some 
confusion that
" when I will die and
Whome am I "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Chircop Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 10:02 AM
I do hope we get to find who we are before we die..So much to ponder in your clever write.Welcome to ps.
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April 10, 2017 at 1:46 AM
Thank u dear
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