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When I Die

WHEN I DIE


When I die,
What a glorious day it  
Will be!
For
I will get rid of this mortal
Body 
That is known as 
ME! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
      30 APRIL 2013

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Eileen Manassian

May 1, 2013 at 2:08 AM

I agree with Donna. Don't hurry now! We want you here with us for longer. Just the though upsets me. Lovely write though!

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 1, 2013 at 3:22 AM

I will try! Thank you for your concern!

Donna Jones

April 30, 2013 at 10:25 PM

Well heaven is grand but let's keep you around a while eh??? :-) :-) :-) lovely poem

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 1, 2013 at 12:15 AM

God willing, I will! Thank you!

Christine Phillips

April 30, 2013 at 2:34 PM

I like this simple work of art. It is very strong. Would you consider the order of words (It will be, instead of will it be) to make it even more stronger?

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 30, 2013 at 5:03 PM

Thy will be done! Thank you!

Manel Gunatillake

April 30, 2013 at 11:11 AM

highly philosophical. Very nice.

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 30, 2013 at 5:07 PM

Thank you! It takes one....

Russell Sivey

April 30, 2013 at 6:23 AM

This is an enlightening and a far superior write my friend! You have written a masterpiece here my friend! I really enjoyed reading your amazing poem this morning! What a tremendous piece Demetrios! A remarkable poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 30, 2013 at 5:21 PM

Thank you Russell!