When I Die 2

Look at I,I Richard Palmer seriously didn't cry,,,
When the ALMIGHTY called,'Poetic Palmer,Poetic Palmer,tell
this physical world bye bye,,,
Don't worry guys,wipe those tears from your eyes,,,
Feel,feel my presence,my spirit didn't blow away like a cloud
in the sky,,,
I am holding the ALMIGHTY hands,
I have become, a part of HIS plan,,,
Watching over and protecting my love ones,,,
An ANGEL,was always my after life intention,,,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sefunmi Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 12:10 PM
'When I die', that is one thought I lack the courage to write about. I have so much to say about it but I always ignore the muse whenever it inspires me to write on this subject. I admire your view of death and I believe I can write about ' when I die'. Smiles
Palmer Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 2:20 PM
feel free,express your vision,it's a great place to let your mind explore,bet you find a boomer
Gregory Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 6:34 AM
angel by design...in life such is the sign...nice piece
Palmer Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 2:17 PM
thank you much Weston
Christian Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 8:44 AM
wow beautiful you are part of his plan and you will surly hold his hands one day thanks for your kind feedback on my poem alcohol dependant thanks to God I found out about him before things went to far and got too deep was only dating briefly but the past 2 weeks saw things for what they are, so i was blessed God pulled me out quick, with no harm to my heart or mind. Amen we ened our angels to watch out for us and im thanfull i have mine.
Palmer Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 10:55 AM
you are blessed,keep praying for protection on your daily journey,thank you Diane
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:42 AM
I believe in angels...to watch over us...awesome poem. Suz
Palmer Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 11:08 AM
our spiritual beliefs are the same,thanks Suzanne
Eastman Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Loved it... You can look over me, too. If I beat you there... I'll look after you.
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 12:28 PM
I will Carol,thats a deal lol,thanks much
Hyler Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
Palmer Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:14 AM
you are welcome James,thanks for the visit
Lamoureux Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Excellent brother and a big Amen!
Palmer Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 6:09 PM
thank you Richard
A  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:17 AM
WOW! Richard, this is awesome...SKAT
Palmer Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 5:57 PM
thanks Skat
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 4:06 PM
Great testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Palmer Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 3:07 PM
your'e welcome Sara,thank you too oxox
Kithinji Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Yah, man. Jah protect.
Palmer Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 11:13 PM
be bless bro,,,nuff love
George   Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Thank you for the uplif with you wonderful poem, Richard. And...thank you for your comments on 'The Memoir'. Elaine
Palmer Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 2:34 PM
thank you Elaine and you are welcome
Horsch Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:37 PM
A very good poem Richard, I think I will have to read some more of your wonderful poetry........Roger
Palmer Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 2:17 PM
be my guest Roger,thank you much
Deschler Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 4:40 PM
A very beautiful and uplifting write. This is quite moving, Richard. Great work!....I wrote something similar titled, "If I Died Now".
Palmer Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 2:10 PM
thank you Kelly,,,gonna check it out
Dylan Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 3:23 PM
RICHARD An Awesome Write.. I Love Reading This Poetry AND SO Inspiring.. YOUR WORDS are prefect... many blessings to you Brooke
Palmer Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 5:53 PM
thanks Brooke,,blessings to you too
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 12:42 PM
i love your word play in this... so powerful and full of hope. Keep it up, richard!.. huggs
Palmer Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 5:52 PM
thank you Nette,,,oxox
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