When I Die 2

Look at I,I Richard Palmer seriously didn't cry,,,
When the ALMIGHTY called,'Poetic Palmer,Poetic Palmer,tell
this physical world bye bye,,,
Don't worry guys,wipe those tears from your eyes,,,
Feel,feel my presence,my spirit didn't blow away like a cloud
in the sky,,,
I am holding the ALMIGHTY hands,
I have become, a part of HIS plan,,,
Watching over and protecting my love ones,,,
An ANGEL,was always my after life intention,,,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/5/2014 12:10:00 PM
'When I die', that is one thought I lack the courage to write about. I have so much to say about it but I always ignore the muse whenever it inspires me to write on this subject. I admire your view of death and I believe I can write about ' when I die'. Smiles
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/5/2014 2:20:00 PM
feel free,express your vision,it's a great place to let your mind explore,bet you find a boomer
Date: 6/21/2014 6:34:00 AM
angel by design...in life such is the sign...nice piece
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/5/2014 2:17:00 PM
thank you much Weston
Date: 6/5/2014 8:44:00 AM
wow beautiful you are part of his plan and you will surly hold his hands one day thanks for your kind feedback on my poem alcohol dependant thanks to God I found out about him before things went to far and got too deep was only dating briefly but the past 2 weeks saw things for what they are, so i was blessed God pulled me out quick, with no harm to my heart or mind. Amen we ened our angels to watch out for us and im thanfull i have mine.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/5/2014 10:55:00 AM
you are blessed,keep praying for protection on your daily journey,thank you Diane
Date: 6/3/2014 2:42:00 AM
I believe in angels...to watch over us...awesome poem. Suz
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Date: 6/4/2014 11:08:00 AM
our spiritual beliefs are the same,thanks Suzanne
Date: 5/31/2014 10:43:00 AM
Loved it... You can look over me, too. If I beat you there... I'll look after you.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/1/2014 12:28:00 PM
I will Carol,thats a deal lol,thanks much
Date: 5/23/2014 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/27/2014 6:14:00 AM
you are welcome James,thanks for the visit
Date: 5/16/2014 3:27:00 PM
Excellent brother and a big Amen!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/16/2014 6:09:00 PM
thank you Richard
Date: 5/15/2014 9:17:00 AM
WOW! Richard, this is awesome...SKAT
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/15/2014 5:57:00 PM
thanks Skat
Date: 5/13/2014 4:06:00 PM
Great testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/14/2014 3:07:00 PM
your'e welcome Sara,thank you too oxox
Date: 5/9/2014 10:32:00 AM
Yah, man. Jah protect.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/9/2014 11:13:00 PM
be bless bro,,,nuff love
Date: 5/8/2014 5:54:00 AM
Thank you for the uplif with you wonderful poem, Richard. And...thank you for your comments on 'The Memoir'. Elaine
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/8/2014 2:34:00 PM
thank you Elaine and you are welcome
Date: 5/7/2014 7:37:00 PM
A very good poem Richard, I think I will have to read some more of your wonderful poetry........Roger
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/8/2014 2:17:00 PM
be my guest Roger,thank you much
Date: 5/7/2014 4:40:00 PM
A very beautiful and uplifting write. This is quite moving, Richard. Great work!....I wrote something similar titled, "If I Died Now".
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/8/2014 2:10:00 PM
thank you Kelly,,,gonna check it out
Date: 5/6/2014 3:23:00 PM
RICHARD An Awesome Write.. I Love Reading This Poetry AND SO Inspiring.. YOUR WORDS are prefect... many blessings to you Brooke
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Date: 5/6/2014 5:53:00 PM
thanks Brooke,,blessings to you too
Date: 5/6/2014 12:42:00 PM
i love your word play in this... so powerful and full of hope. Keep it up, richard!.. huggs
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/6/2014 5:52:00 PM
thank you Nette,,,oxox
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