When I Close My Eyes

I was feeling under the weather
Felt strange for some reason
So, I laid down and close my eyes
After my eyes were closed I
Suddenly, saw GOD’S face
His imagine was made from
Colorful stars, bright red
Green and yellow, but
His eyes were dark brown
As they seem to stare out
Into space
He had a small smile on his face
It was the most beautiful thing
I had ever saw before 
The sky seems to come alive
It lit up with bright white stars
Even the clouds had shifted
Surrounding his colorful image
I thought, I had made it to
Heaven
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Yeeka Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 7:38 AM
God's handwork is who he is
Ward Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 7:25 PM
THAT'S SO TRUE. HE IS THE ALMIGHTY
Edmonds  Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 12:12 PM
A little taste of heaven perhaps, God knows when you need a little help to get back to feeling all’s well within yourself... A lovely write Daisy, best wishes Belle x
Ward Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 7:26 PM
THANKS SO MUCH.
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