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When I Close My Eyes

I was feeling under the weather Felt strange for some reason So, I laid down and close my eyes After my eyes were closed I Suddenly, saw GOD’S face His imagine was made from Colorful stars, bright red Green and yellow, but His eyes were dark brown As they seem to stare out Into space He had a small smile on his face It was the most beautiful thing I had ever saw before The sky seems to come alive It lit up with bright white stars Even the clouds had shifted Surrounding his colorful image I thought, I had made it to Heaven

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Date: 1/22/2021 7:38:00 AM
God's handwork is who he is
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Daisy Ward
Date: 1/26/2021 7:25:00 PM
THAT'S SO TRUE. HE IS THE ALMIGHTY
Date: 1/21/2021 12:12:00 PM
A little taste of heaven perhaps, God knows when you need a little help to get back to feeling all’s well within yourself... A lovely write Daisy, best wishes Belle x
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Daisy Ward
Date: 1/26/2021 7:26:00 PM
THANKS SO MUCH.

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