Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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When I Am With You

~When I am With You~ 
(Rhyme) 


Its really amazing what I think 
Most of the time when I am with you 
I've never thought that being in love 
Could make me feel like this with you 

So many things that just come to me 
So many thoughts that come to my mind 
When I look into those sexy brown eyes of yours 
I wonder if you can see what I have here in mind 

I know that most of the time 
Is very hard for some people to believe 
In love of any kind and you must know that by now 
Some people choose to love while others prefer to grieve 

As for me I truly believe that loving is worth everything all the time
Because love is the best thing that can happen to any of us any time. 
 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015



January,03,2015

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 4, 2015 at 7:41 AM Great Love poem D. Perfect 10. I always appreciate your love poems. You are deep.Your friend Rajat

Gary Bateman January 3, 2015 at 4:09 PM Dear "D", Another one of your most exquisite love writes that you've once again rendered so very well!! A magnificent 7+++++ from and this one's going in my New Year's FAV file!! (I always like how you visually punctuate your poetry with the kinds of photos you post in the NOTES block.) The certainly work with me!! Very Well-Done My Dear. The message you present is quite clear. Love is that all-emotive and all-important force in our lives. Best Always "D," Gary