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When I Am Sleeping

I find you down a winding road, your name engraved in cold, cold stone, I come my love in every season, I come to lay a single red rose. When you left me I was broken, my heart a thousand jagged pieces, now, I have this emptiness in my soul, I wear a mask to hide my tears. You always whisper when I am sleeping, in the quiet hours of the night, that is when I know you are still near, I feel your cold lips pressed to mine. You always whisper when I am sleeping, I toss and turn moaning your name, I wake suddenly was that your voice, and my tears could fill an ocean, You always whisper when I am sleeping. We thought we had a forever, we thought we had our plan figured out, we thought we would grow old together, but, your fate is engraved on that stone. A million times I have clenched my fist, asking the sky, why, why, why, A million times I have fallen to my knees, weeping why, why, why. You always whisper when I am sleeping, in the quiet hours of the night, that is when I know you are still near, I feel your cold lips pressed to mine. You always whisper when I am sleeping, I toss and turn moaning your name, I wake suddenly was that your voice, and my tears could fill an ocean, You always whisper when I am sleeping. You always whisper when I am sleeping. You always whisper when I am sleeping. You always whisper when I am sleeping. _____________________________ September 10, 2020 Poetry/Lyric/When I am Sleeping Copyright Protected, ID 20-1284-582-03 All rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Song 1- Cold - Quiet Now sponsor, Rob Carmack Eighth Place

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Date: 9/24/2020 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful story/write. Your pen was working overtime. Enjoy your wonderful win................
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Constance La France
Date: 9/28/2020 9:00:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the complinent _Constance
Date: 9/23/2020 6:47:00 PM
Constance, your lament is heartbled blatant. Captured the desperation very articulately. Congratulations on well earned Win!!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2020 11:11:00 AM
Sigrid, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 9/23/2020 6:05:00 PM
Some say some get three. Once knew an older woman who didn't get one. Now I had three, you had one, but I think the worse is that older woman who got none. Thank you and congrats.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2020 11:12:00 AM
Rob, thanks for an inspiring contest and for my placement _Constance
Date: 9/12/2020 6:21:00 AM
This poem could easily be the lyrics of a song. You need a friendly composer to complete the creation. Good luck! Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2020 9:53:00 AM
Geoffrey, thanks for the compliment, I actually did have one of my poems put to music in the past, though I do not consider myself a song lyric writer I find if I put my mind to it that I can come up with something like this one for the contest _Constance
Date: 9/10/2020 4:16:00 PM
wow, so emotive and so poignant. This is one very powerful poem/song. I hope Rob places you very high. I can't imagine it any other way! (thanks for my win in your last contest, btw. Hope you are doing well this week)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2020 1:14:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the visit and compliment on my song/poem.. I hope rob likes it too _Constance
Date: 9/10/2020 1:25:00 PM
Splendid poem even if sadness filters its verse. I love sad poems though. For over three years I have felt nothing but sorrow. Thus I admire your verse.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2020 1:15:00 AM
Victor, thanks for visiting and for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance

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