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When I Am Old

WHEN I AM OLD When I am old, left no expectation. Two wings as body and mind can't cope up, attaining physical limitation. Zealous mind still young energetic sharp. In youth, ’When I am old’: Unthinkable. Arrogance dynamism rushing restless. Old age sure to come, inevitable, static seniority to access. Body needs support and help, when I am old. Now afraid of sickness seeking favor. Sense of self- jealousy, when youth was bold. and flowers of success bloomed in flavor. Now to seek solace to find a place worth, just to fit myself at least not to brood Cold days, colder nights, coldest mind wish warmth. and to respond last bell in happy mood. 07/28/18

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Date: 7/30/2018 3:53:00 AM
Very deep and profound reflections in this poem, dear Anisha. Good luck in the contest. Elaine
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/30/2018 12:16:00 PM
Thank you Elain for your visit n appreciation. Warm wishes.
Date: 7/29/2018 11:55:00 AM
I was getting sad till your last line :) a very relatable piece Anisha, well done! My best to you in the contest, xomo!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/29/2018 12:02:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. Love

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