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When I Am Not Me

Just lines to be read Lifted from a page It's then I am free It's then I can be Anyone, anybody Or just not me Self concious, aware Let mellow to bare What conjures below Rises to the air A place in make believe A place to become... To be what u want it to be....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2013 4:40:00 PM

Shaz, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA

Jeremy Martin

Date: 3/28/2013 12:07:00 PM

'Let mellow to bare/What conjures below/Rises in the air' -- Hauntingly beautiful lines, entering sublime territory. I'm a fan.

Shaz Cheesman
Date: 3/29/2013 2:37:00 AM

hello Jeremy - Thank you for your comments. Gretaly appreciate - Shaz

Bernard Colasurdo

Date: 3/26/2013 1:10:00 AM

Hi Shaz, this is written just beautifully. congrats on being on the Home page.

Shaz Cheesman
Date: 3/29/2013 2:38:00 AM

Hi Bernard - thankyou very much. Its a surprise to me too. Its been awhile since Ive been on the soup. Im glad to be back - Shaz

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/25/2013 10:27:00 AM

Congrats on your featured write.

Shaz Cheesman
Date: 3/29/2013 2:38:00 AM

Hi Vince - thankyou for stopping by and your comments. Regards Shaz

Richard Palmer

Date: 5/26/2012 4:55:00 PM

so self concious

Shaz Cheesman
Date: 5/26/2012 8:56:00 PM

You read it well Richard........Shaz

Ryan Harris

Date: 5/25/2012 2:34:00 AM

Unbelievable Shaz, un...be...lievable.. Your words speak deep to the soul not just the ears. I could feel every word as though I were standing in your very shoes.. BRILLIANT!! x Ryan

Shaz Cheesman
Date: 5/25/2012 2:50:00 AM

Hey Ryan - thank you so much for your comments. I'm so glad that u connected with my poem .......Shaz