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When I Am Not Me

Just lines to be read
Lifted from a page
It's then I am free

It's then I can be 
Anyone, anybody
Or just not me

Self concious, aware
Let mellow to bare
What conjures below
Rises to the air

A place in make believe 
A place to become...
To be what u want it to be....

Copyright © Shaz Cheesman | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/30/2013 4:40:00 PM Shaz, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA Login to Reply

Jeremy Martin Date: 3/28/2013 12:07:00 PM 'Let mellow to bare/What conjures below/Rises in the air' -- Hauntingly beautiful lines, entering sublime territory. I'm a fan. Login to Reply Shaz Cheesman Date: 3/29/2013 2:37:00 AM hello Jeremy - Thank you for your comments. Gretaly appreciate - Shaz

Bernard Colasurdo Date: 3/26/2013 1:10:00 AM Hi Shaz, this is written just beautifully. congrats on being on the Home page. Login to Reply Shaz Cheesman Date: 3/29/2013 2:38:00 AM Hi Bernard - thankyou very much. Its a surprise to me too. Its been awhile since Ive been on the soup. Im glad to be back - Shaz

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 3/25/2013 10:27:00 AM Congrats on your featured write. Login to Reply Shaz Cheesman Date: 3/29/2013 2:38:00 AM Hi Vince - thankyou for stopping by and your comments. Regards Shaz

Richard Palmer Date: 5/26/2012 4:55:00 PM so self concious Login to Reply Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/26/2012 8:56:00 PM You read it well Richard........Shaz

Ryan Harris Date: 5/25/2012 2:34:00 AM Unbelievable Shaz, un...be...lievable.. Your words speak deep to the soul not just the ears. I could feel every word as though I were standing in your very shoes.. BRILLIANT!! x Ryan Login to Reply Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/25/2012 2:50:00 AM Hey Ryan - thank you so much for your comments. I'm so glad that u connected with my poem .......Shaz