Shaz Cheesman Poet Free verse

When I Am Not Me

Just lines to be read
Lifted from a page
It's then I am free

It's then I can be 
Anyone, anybody
Or just not me

Self concious, aware
Let mellow to bare
What conjures below
Rises to the air

A place in make believe 
A place to become...
To be what u want it to be....

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Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2013 at 4:40 PM Shaz, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA

Jeremy Martin March 28, 2013 at 12:07 PM 'Let mellow to bare/What conjures below/Rises in the air' -- Hauntingly beautiful lines, entering sublime territory. I'm a fan. Shaz Cheesman March 29, 2013 at 2:37 AM hello Jeremy - Thank you for your comments. Gretaly appreciate - Shaz

Bernard Colasurdo March 26, 2013 at 1:10 AM Hi Shaz, this is written just beautifully. congrats on being on the Home page. Shaz Cheesman March 29, 2013 at 2:38 AM Hi Bernard - thankyou very much. Its a surprise to me too. Its been awhile since Ive been on the soup. Im glad to be back - Shaz

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 25, 2013 at 10:27 AM Congrats on your featured write. Shaz Cheesman March 29, 2013 at 2:38 AM Hi Vince - thankyou for stopping by and your comments. Regards Shaz

Richard Palmer May 26, 2012 at 4:55 PM so self concious Shaz Cheesman May 26, 2012 at 8:56 PM You read it well Richard........Shaz

Ryan Harris May 25, 2012 at 2:34 AM Unbelievable Shaz, un...be...lievable.. Your words speak deep to the soul not just the ears. I could feel every word as though I were standing in your very shoes.. BRILLIANT!! x Ryan Shaz Cheesman May 25, 2012 at 2:50 AM Hey Ryan - thank you so much for your comments. I'm so glad that u connected with my poem .......Shaz