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When I Am No More

An empty space in the dining table A vacant space in the car for four My room vacant without an owner My pets masterless But still my dreams and a handful of aspirations remains trapped in the gap between the living and the eternal If only i was lent a patient ear If they hadn't forced me to push further in the world of competition Maybe i would have been spared

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Stephan McBride

Date: 8/24/2013 10:38:00 PM

great write,,love it

Cherie Thomas

Date: 7/7/2013 5:12:00 PM

Hi shreyas,,, wow this so true to life & a sad reality..can so relate to this poem. But still my dreams, and a handful of aspirations, Remain trapped, in the gap. Between the living and the eternal..., maybe i would have been spared. very deep words....ty4sharing cherie...

Colleen Bono

Date: 7/7/2013 2:01:00 PM

thank you for your visit.I wrote that poem for Poet Destroyer who lost her mom recently.My birth mom passed in 1976.I was 7.My mom that raised me,my aunt,passed in 2002.Yes they were good people.Colleen