When I Am Dust

as you 
remember 
slender trees 

and sonnets sung 
on open seas 
will you, my love, 

remember me? 
when I am dust 
unto the grave 

entombed 
within the white 
worm cave 

will you 
speak for 
my soul to save? 

and when I burn 
in flames of fire 
for heated passion 

and desire 
please toss a rose 
upon my pyre
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mcmurray Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Hi Jessica and thanks a bunch. tom
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July 30, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Hi Barbara and thank you so much for the kind words. tom
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July 30, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Love to you too Carol and thank you so much for reading my scribbles. I am honored. tom
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 11:02 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Tom. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Yikes, this is special..well done. BG
Arteaga Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 2:49 PM
very nice poem, much enjoyed reading
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