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When Hero's Fall

When Hero's Fall When Hero's Fall it's disheartening most of all To all has it's time They were there to get you through To give you hope They shared their strength When it seemed darkest of all They were there so you wouldn't fall If you felt it was done they would whisper one more step then your done Even when you've given your last they whisper one more step then your done Now the time of Hero's has past Taken up the mantel Now silent Whispers no more When Hero's Fall There age has come and gone As it has been said.. "Now feet of clay"... A place in my heart there will always be For they are still Hero's to me. © veritatem voluntatem 2017

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Date: 3/1/2025 7:26:00 PM
Met you today on the street, you poems are a wonder and delight. Keep your originalty flowing. Sleep tight special spirit. May you have peace now and forever. You made our day. We were the ones who gave us some of your notebook paper to write down your username. It was March 1st and we were visiting from Michigan. Let me know how we can support your work
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Date: 1/12/2022 11:11:00 AM
I had a pretty lengthy conversation with you and my friend one day in September of 2021 discussing your poems and discussing your thoughts about the different realities / dimensions that shape our way of thinking. The conversation has stuck with me ever since and I would love to discuss your poetry as well into greater depth. I remember you describing the intention of the order of your poems and I loved how you introduced with "When Hero's Fall". I hope we can meet again to discuss!
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