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he's a seriously troubled soul dwelling on regrets they're eating him alive things he can't forgive hurts he can't get past dreams he left afloat cobwebs in his mind his rambling thoughts will drive him off the cliff and sink him to despair it's bordering insanity i see him surely drowning and there's nothing i can do if he won't grab the buoy

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