Deb Wilson Poet Senryu

When Harry Met Sally---I'Ll Have What She's Having

yes i feel so good
that's what i'm talking about...
let me yell and moan

people are staring
but i'm making a point...
harry's turning red

ohh baby baby
see i faked you out but good...
now please pass the salt



for contest senyru a movie scene
sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 9:50 PM DEB..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Poet Destroyer A January 16, 2012 at 10:54 PM Debb, a very good entry...i recall this movie... good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2012 at 10:10 PM hahaha. you snuck this one in because I did not even know it was in the contest until the last minute and I showed it to NIkko just as we were closing it out. Congratulations, Deb!

Tirzah Conway January 9, 2012 at 9:50 AM My all time favorite scene in that movie - Did you know that the woman that said "I'll have what she's having" was Billy Crystal's mom? That makes it even funnier to me! Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~

Carol Sunshine Brown January 9, 2012 at 7:26 AM Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Deb. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2012 at 1:50 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 7, 2012 at 12:36 PM Well this sure is a memorable scene in the movie and you captured it well in your senryu, Deb! congrats on your win! :D

Gwendolen Song January 7, 2012 at 3:10 AM Congrats Deb..these 2 characters sound "over the top" to me. Very interesting write. GWendolen

Harry Horsman December 31, 2011 at 8:04 AM A winner here, awesome poem about this hilarious movie scene. harry

Robert Pettit December 30, 2011 at 10:51 PM An excellent film, and your senryu describes it well. Good luck to you in the contest.